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Lyrics for a song i'm writing

 
 
Reply Tue 24 Jun, 2014 07:49 pm
these are just some lyrics i out together and i was just wondering if anyone had any opinions and ways to possible improve it thanks

Living in a battle, all battered and confused
Wishing I didn’t have to stay
My body too bruised to use
What happened to morals, no one knows
Everyone does what pleases them
There is no way, no way I can win this battle
Even if I could what would I do

Always thinking, always plotting
but never doing
that’s what’s killing me


Show your courage, be different
you know the world won’t change,
even though it can
So, take a stand
You will never know
If you never try
So, take a step outside
Outside your comfort zone

Always thinking, always plotting
but never doing
that’s what’s killing me

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Lordyaswas
 
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Reply Wed 25 Jun, 2014 01:00 am
@travman101,
Nice, but you need an animal or a vehicle to be included somewhere.

May I suggest a Yak and/or a Nissan Micra.
roger
 
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Reply Wed 25 Jun, 2014 01:19 am
@Lordyaswas,
SHILL! SPAMMER!
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