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Wed 4 Jul, 2012 10:40 pm
To be selected as a subject in this study, a patient has to meet the following criteria simultaneously: a septicemia adult patient (developed infection and with two or more systemic inflammatory response syndromes) with clinical evidence of shock and hyperperfusion.
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I've attempted to edit it, but not sure my editing to be correct:
1) To be selected as a subject in this study ===>>> To be selected into this study
2) The word "simultaneously" is not necessary there
@oristarA,
3) a patient has to meet ===>>> one has to meet
@oristarA,
It sound fine the way it is along with the exclusion of the word "simultaneously."
@InfraBlue,
InfraBlue wrote:
It sound fine the way it is along with the exclusion of the word "simultaneously."
Thank you.
Remove the word and the orginal meaning will still remain intact?
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