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Freestyle. Strut your stuff.

 
 
1234Troy1234
 
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Reply Fri 17 Feb, 2012 10:18 am
@Bleet,
your rap is like a present i rip up and then descend it
admit your rap is made of ****
time to flush you down the toilet
like some milk i had to spoil it
first off you need to learn to spell
yeah cold like a demon sent straight from hell
this is intense but ill still leave you in suspense
you dont make dollars, well at least try to make some sense
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RonPrice
 
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Reply Sat 7 Apr, 2012 10:55 pm
@Bambino,
SECRET DIARIES
MORE INTERESTING THAN MINE

The Secret Diaries of Miss Anne Lister is a 2010 British television biographical drama about a 19th century Yorkshire landowner Anne Lister.1 The Real Anne Lister2 followed on Australian television. Anne Lister (1791–1840) was a wealthy, unmarried woman who inherited land from her uncle in 1826.

Just for the record and to place Anne Lister and her diaries in some historical perspective, 1826 was the year the second president of the United States, John Adams, died and the year the first photograph was taken. And also, just for the record, the view of early 19th century England, at least in literature, in fiction writing is seen, for those people who read 19th century literature, through the eyes of Jane Austen and the Bronte sisters.

Throughout her life Lister kept diaries which chronicled the details of her everyday life, including her lesbian relationships, her financial concerns, her industrial activities and her work on her 400 acres. She was a polymath, an autodidact and a traveller. She lived at the centre of the Regency era, a period which historians call the pre-Victorian period from 1811, when the formal Regency began, through 1837 when Queen Victoria came to the throne. The Regency was the period when King George III was deemed unfit to rule and his son, the Prince of Wales ruled as his proxy as Prince Regent: 1811 to 1820. The Prince Regent became George IV in 1820 on the death of his father.

I’ve been keeping diaries for more than 25 years, but I don’t think mine will ever have quite the spice that Lister’s had or have. Thanks to the direction of James Kent and the starring role of Maxine Peake as Lister, with a script by Jane English a mass audience in this third millennium, more than a century and a half after the diaries were written, can get a taste of Anne Lister’s 4 million word diaries. If my poetry is included in my diaries I can match Lister in quantity, but I can’t turn the erotic screws on for millions and billions of viewers, mirabile dictu. The Real Anne Lister reveals a complex character: pioneering, self-serving, rebellious, manipulative and bold.

My diaries are far too philosophical and religious, intellectual and exotic, concerned as they are with the new religion I have been associated with for nearly 60 years.3 I, too, may be complex and pioneering and many of the things Lister is or was. It is difficult to assess oneself.

A sixth of Lister’s words concern the intimate details of her romantic and sexual relationships. I’ve never quantified that portion of my diaries, poetic and otherwise, that have a highly sensuous style and manner, content and mode, but my diaries would not entice the voyeur. There is little turn on those whose interests are sexual. Readers of Lister’s diaries, at least those who would want to engage with the digest of her 4 million words, will not in all likelihood get bored. I cannot guarantee the absence of boredom for readers who come to my memoiristic works.

The film The Secret Diaries of Miss Anne Lister premièred at the 24th London Lesbian and Gay Film Festival on 17 March 2010 and was screened in Australia tonight, 18 months later. -Ron Price with thanks to 1ABC1TV, 13 November 2011, 8:30-10:05 p.m., 2 ABC1 TV, 12 March 2012, 12;30-1:30 a.m., and 3 the Baha’i Faith.

Some said the film1 was sex-obsessed
on those wild-windy Yorkshire moors:
this story of the first modern lesbian, &
part of the fountainhead of queer studies2
say some scholars of lesbian sexuality!!

Her pioneering life and wide-ranging
travels as well as her relationships in
those sexually charged 4 million word
diaries concerned themselves with the
social & emotional lot of lesbians in an
era of oppressive patriarchy….The film
did not preclude a bit of hot girl-on-girl
action for those of a puerile and yet of a
punctilious nature. Snatching that carnal
ecstasy from stolen moments with a true
love will have a claustrophobic and yet a
a curiously liberating effect for some of the
millions and billions who will see this film.
The complexity of her character and what
happened to those diaries was as remarkable
as Anne Lister’s life & her writing: mirabile.3

1 The Secret Diaries of Miss Anne Lister
2 Queer studies is the critical theory based study of issues relating to sexual orientation and gender identity usually focusing on lesbian, gay, bisexual, and transgender(LGBT) people and cultures. Universities have also labelled this area of analysis Sexual Diversity Studies, or Sexualities Studies. Once only meaning odd or unusual, and later an anti-gay epithet, "queer" used in reference to such individuals and communities remains controversial.

Originally centred on LGBT history and literary theory, the field has expanded to include the academic study of issues raised in biology, sociology, anthropology, the history of science, philosophy, psychology, political science, ethics, and other fields by an examination of the identity, lives, history, and perception of queer people.
3 Latin word for marvellous. I have found, especially as I have got older, human character to be highly complex and Sue Perkins, who takes us on this journey through Lister’s life, reveals this complexity for viewers.

Ron Price
13/11/’11 and updated on 13/3/’12
MURDOCK212
 
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Reply Sun 22 Apr, 2012 04:07 pm
Quick 32 bars got me thinking on top of my dome/
first days was the worst days when playing with stones/
paid days got me working with metal and chromes/
had to get that cash, stash the mac n settle at home/
cause i was heating up like a kettle does in the slum/
yeah thats right i was born alone left in the slums/
i'll die alone, even though im protected with guns/
born and raised as a hoodlum now got me ******* with thugs/
i wish i never did, but gotta sin in this life i live/
life is sinnin, crimes is commitin since i was a kid/
i aint kiddin, my main aims to plot and make more than six figures/
look now i be living a marvellous life, livin it high/
killin it high, full pockets like rockets got me reaching the sky/
reach the sky with no limits, 40 mill got me this ILL figures/
**** a spliff, im sipping hennesy with rich niggas like rich diminds/
cigars, fancy cars, dress large **** niggas know im all in it/
but truthly i dont big it, just said it now but keep it low/
spin it with those keys of coke, my pees i dont wanna show/
cause i know that i'll have on my back is these fake g's n foes/
fake bitches make my temper grow, but i keep it peak n slow/
be all neat with clothes n show that i aint weak like hoes/
Check it, beats I wreck it and come to u then snatch ur neckless/
Leave u breathless, chop ur neck off now u can’t breathe ur neck less/
Left chainless real, took ur stainless steal, beat ur eyes out leave u speckless/
u got beat on and left with a bump on ur head, got u looking pregnant/
That’s what happens when **** u shouldn’t mention with the wrong Segment/
Uhh MURDOCK got shot, **** nahh he a ******* beast/
Any nigga up front him come confront him best believe he a ******* g/
Keeps it peak, don’t be where the weak be, with guns he speaks/
Converts his gun to a mouth and makes it eat his enimese/
takes out the heart and makes his enimese get on their ******* knees/
see em ducking G, cause they know its their last time to ******* breathe/
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Bambino
 
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Reply Sun 22 Apr, 2012 04:43 pm
@RonPrice,
DIE?
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irabbit
 
  1  
Reply Fri 27 Apr, 2012 11:40 pm
@THE BOG,
u think ur **** is the best omfg i dint know
u got slowflow well mines more
u get 30 % extra cuz ur fucked up u cant battle me
man even though ull be more than 20 years
n im just 11 thought ill let u know
cuz i know ull be wonderin how the ****
do i have such a big flow
and i rap tight even though im not white
so shut up cuz ur rhymes are broke urself
wat u don even know me i kno ima new homie
but how can ur daggers colide with my throat
u see u got no place in this gangsta world
so u better go home or else
ull get ur ass fucked up
and man i don wanna go on forever
or u guys will think imma flow writer
cuz im not imma rap writer
so ill end this **** wid a **** u
but have a nice day
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G8GRAFITTI
 
  1  
Reply Tue 1 May, 2012 12:03 pm
@THE BOG,
ISTEN HERE NOTORIOUS,
IM ABOUT TO BE VICTORIOUS,
THIS BATTLE WAS OVER BEFORE IT STARTED,
THIS RIGHT HERE AINT 4 THE FAINT-HEARTED,
U COME AT ME AND THATS ALL U GOT,
...OHH YEAH I FORGOT,
UR A BITCH,
WITH UR LAME ASS ****,
COME ONE MAN,
U AINT EVEN SET A BATTLE PLAN,
BUT I DISTROY YOU WITH THIS,
CAUSE IM THE **** WITH THIS,
I BE SPITTIN FIRE ON THE MIC THEY SHOULD CALL ME THE DRAGON,
U TRY TO B HARD BUT UR LYRICS ARE SAGGIN,
DOWN TO THE FLOOR,
MAN IM SURE EVERYONE KNOWS THE SCORE.
I KNOW A DUDE WHO CAN U LIK U UP
IM THE WORLD S BEST RAPPER DONT EVEN TRY TO STRUT
WE EAT LIKE AN OREO NO WONDER UR THE WORLDS FAVOURITE SNACK
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J all day
 
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Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 11:39 am
@Bambino,
Hey there bambino
you'll never make it there as a rapper
it's sad
you might as well make a living with a taxi cab.
Yeah your not g
No you are just a hater
Makin your tips standin by an elevator
Ha the only woman that loves your face would be your mother
So take 2 steps back and lay off
You mother f...er
you think your Rollin hot
But your really not
Now Don't get your feelings hurt
But compared to mine
Your rap Is dirt

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J all day
 
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Reply Tue 3 Jul, 2012 12:01 pm
@Bambino,
Hey there bambino
you'll never make it there as a rapper
it's sad
you might as well make a living with a taxi cab.
Yeah your not g
No you are just a hater
Makin your tips standin by an elevator
Ha the only woman that loves your face would be your mother
So take 2 steps back and lay off
You mother f...er
you think your Rollin hot
But your really not
Now Don't get your feelings hurt
But compared to mine
Your rap Is dirt

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Oopan
 
  1  
Reply Wed 24 Oct, 2012 10:10 pm
This 2 all yo haters, pretend MC's,
Playing sh1t music bout birds an the bees
You ain't no neon trees o black eyed peas
But tell me this, neither am I
At least I'll admit it, bring it mad guys
Dis it and pis it and kiss it (smooch)
I'm sure mad enough to go and list it
Freestyle the whole while you ain't half bad
Ain't half good either fukking douchebag
Maybe some language will make yo listen up
Sorry ass bi1ch bullsh1t don't give fukk
Am I speaking yo language now dude
Or put you in even worse of a mood?
I'm done for now bros, but I'll be back. Ready to give you a heart attack
Wrathe
 
  1  
Reply Thu 3 Jan, 2013 01:42 pm
@Oopan,
He's never coming back

Mr bad words, yer a sad turd, douchebag, (word!)
Got jet lag? Just as much as, the next fag, you dead, man
You talkin bout bein g, yo no OG, know me?
Just showing, that I can beat something that I used to be
Aaron is you, Aaron is me, jacks no real...
Check please!
MURDOCK212
 
  1  
Reply Thu 18 Apr, 2013 05:30 pm
@Wrathe,
Just few bars I wrote up back in 07 when I was locked up n my homeboy had passed away like a month before this was written, just kicked in few facts bout my nigga Tango, just layed out these bars backed then n recently found em, though i'd share my written work back in 2007 with yall. R.I.P Tang TEE Tango.

That nigga Tango
Lived a smart life but chose to kick it
Packed ounces of crack
On the block niggaz claimed em the realist
As a young kid he was known for stealin
Watch what ya expose, tango might steal it
Growin up in the hood he started sellin crack
Had no chance in this game without havin a gat
thats something he taught me
Survival mode was low, u never know when bullets may blow
So he kept himself packed, strapped incase of being jacked
Brought up by a dope fiend mother
No father figure in his life
Addicted to crime, at night he used to sleep with nines
Paranoid, smoking weed daily
That good kush ****, never know when enemies gon pump clips n put hits
Yeah that nigga tango done things he shouldnt off
Left a pack of haters pissed off
They put a hit on him, price to his head
But kept on missin him, tryed make sure he dead
Instead he fled n went, made allies with gangs hopeing they got his back
Moved on from crack to bringing kilos
In the hood he was well-respected, known hero
Bringing numbers after livin under zero
Kept himself active and livin lavish
sittin back laughin cause he new his styles flashy
Too persisten, ahead of his time with clear vision
Although livin it, he was unaware of clocks tickin
Still kept on his **** watchin shipments bringin his **** in
But was never alert of being caught under surveillance
Full tapes of him accomplishing his mission
Federals brought him to justice
Justifying his habits, persuading judges for capital punishment
Neither did he know rats was snitchin, his game was ****'d, they was shuttin it
bitchin behind his back these fuckin rats, federals was lovin it
Second degree Murda, distribuution of drugs he got sentence to life by crooked judges
Felt like a crook, had nothing to say so he kept shut
Went inside state prison, never felt comfortable
He didnt know few phoneys was in a cell a floor below
They became boys neither did he know them boys was foes
Those phoney niggas planned to whack him
Hired assassins to invade his space n attack him
sharp shank wrapped with plasters bout to cause a disastour
14 years into his sentence, he sat back layin in his cell
He was set up by 2 inmates left dead in cell.








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