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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  1  
Tue 15 Apr, 2014 01:31 pm
@vonny,
Life's looking better,
Hope is on the horizon,
And my spirit soars
vonny
 
  1  
Tue 15 Apr, 2014 02:09 pm
@firefly,
And my spirit soars
With eagles to heights unknown
And now there is calm
Pearlylustre
 
  1  
Fri 18 Apr, 2014 06:47 am
@vonny,
And now there is calm.
One more year slides by. Happy?
Reckless memories.
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Fri 18 Apr, 2014 08:53 am
@Pearlylustre,
Reckless memories.
Thoughts and words, none to regret.
Now a soul is missed.
0 Replies
 
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 04:30 am
Now a soul is missed
So stand up and be counted
Do you measure up?
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 09:12 am
@vonny,
Do you measure up?
To be branded uncaring.
Silence is to blame.
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 09:30 am
@Daisy Ryder,
Silence is to blame
For most misunderstandings,
Please, communicate
Daisy Ryder
 
  1  
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 09:48 am
@firefly,
Please, communicate.
Hiding feelings or grudges.
Share with me your thoughts.
0 Replies
 
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 02:17 pm
Share with me your thoughts
blank eyes masking emotion
When did feelings cease
ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 18 May, 2014 02:16 pm
@vonny,
when did feelings cease
to bubble and fizz between
these people in love
vonny
 
  1  
Wed 21 May, 2014 02:22 pm
@ehBeth,
these people in love
oblivious to the world
eyes blind to all else
ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 23 May, 2014 04:51 pm
@vonny,
eyes blind to all else
that brings beauty to others
she focuses here
ossobuco
 
  2  
Fri 23 May, 2014 05:03 pm
@ehBeth,
She focuses here,
where it just rained for the first
time in many months.

I use rained as one sound. I often have done similar but not sure what the thinking is on that by now.
ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 23 May, 2014 05:08 pm
@ossobuco,
Time in many months
passes so slowly that we
doubt ourselves again.
firefly
 
  1  
Fri 23 May, 2014 09:08 pm
@ehBeth,
Doubt ourselves again,
Questioning the choices made,
Is there certainty?

ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 23 May, 2014 09:44 pm
@firefly,
Is there certainty?
That is not clear at this time.
We will have to wait.
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 24 May, 2014 01:20 pm
@ossobuco,
We will have to wait
for some sense to be made of
our complex lifespan
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 24 May, 2014 02:02 pm
@vonny,
Our complex lifespan
Leads us to look back when aged,
What did it all mean?
vonny
 
  1  
Sat 24 May, 2014 02:06 pm
@firefly,
What did it all mean?
But is it better to leave
the past well alone
ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 1 Jun, 2014 08:01 am
@vonny,
The past? well, alone
I wouldn't have laughed much.
I laugh constantly.
 

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