firefly
 
  2  
Reply Wed 18 Jan, 2012 10:28 am
@Dutchy,
Fading at sunrise,
The moon retreats from my view,
And takes stars with it
Dutchy
 
  2  
Reply Fri 20 Jan, 2012 02:07 am
@firefly,
And takes stars with it.
My star to meet me at night,
I gaze forever.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Reply Sun 5 Feb, 2012 03:15 pm
@Dutchy,
I gaze forever
Blinded by the moon in your
Oily midnight eyes.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Reply Sun 5 Feb, 2012 05:59 pm
@tsarstepan,
Oily midnight eyes.
Wide, deep, lovely, expressive,
lively, impressive.
firefly
 
  2  
Reply Sun 5 Feb, 2012 08:33 pm
@Dutchy,
Lively, impressive,
A beautiful teenager,
Headed for great things
Dutchy
 
  1  
Reply Tue 7 Feb, 2012 04:16 am
@firefly,
Headed for great things.
Showers are so nice; I love
coming out all clean.
firefly
 
  2  
Reply Tue 7 Feb, 2012 12:40 pm
@Dutchy,
Coming out all clean,
And the laundry smells so good,
Love that detergent!
Dutchy
 
  1  
Reply Tue 7 Feb, 2012 03:28 pm
@firefly,
Love that detergent!
Can't escape the boring task,
to iron that stuff.
firefly
 
  3  
Reply Fri 10 Feb, 2012 02:19 pm
@Dutchy,
To iron that stuff,
You'll really need a steam press.
Those are deep wrinkles
Dutchy
 
  1  
Reply Sat 11 Feb, 2012 06:53 pm
@firefly,
Those are deep wrinkles.
Layered over yellowed flesh,
crinkled onion age.
firefly
 
  2  
Reply Sat 11 Feb, 2012 09:13 pm
@Dutchy,
Crinkled onion age,
Layers of experience,
Covered by thin skin
Dutchy
 
  1  
Reply Sun 12 Feb, 2012 02:15 am
@firefly,
Covered by thin skin.
Often talks like a lawyer,
to impress the guys.
ehBeth
 
  1  
Reply Sun 11 Mar, 2012 06:35 pm
@Dutchy,
To impress the guys,
arranging flowers is not
the route best taken.
demonhunter
 
  1  
Reply Sun 11 Mar, 2012 08:58 pm
@ehBeth,
the best route taken
for all the lemmings like me
is to take one's time
ossobuco
 
  3  
Reply Sun 11 Mar, 2012 09:43 pm
@demonhunter,
Is to take one's time?
please, give us a break, and let
be lemming buffers.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Reply Mon 12 Mar, 2012 02:34 am
@ossobuco,
Be lemming buffers.
Orange, gold, and red fire,
first day of autumn.
demonhunter
 
  1  
Reply Mon 12 Mar, 2012 08:16 am
@Dutchy,
first day of autumn
time to sit and watch the leaves
slowly turning hues
firefly
 
  1  
Reply Mon 12 Mar, 2012 06:51 pm
@demonhunter,
Slowly turning hues,
Lobsters boiling in the pot,
Bursting into red
demonhunter
 
  1  
Reply Mon 12 Mar, 2012 08:40 pm
@firefly,
bursting into red
white and blowing my brains out
boogers are funny
ossobuco
 
  2  
Reply Mon 12 Mar, 2012 09:29 pm
@demonhunter,
Boogers are funny,
hunny, get the basket now
so we can fry them.
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