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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:28 pm
in the melting snow
times darkling sojourn touches
the kernels vector
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Post: # 3,796,215
View Profile ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:37 pm
the kernels vector?
the kernals slump quiet
Free the kernels, rage.
Post: # 3,796,220
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:44 pm
Messed that up, oh, well.
Post: # 3,796,225
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:51 pm
It does have a lovely stream of conscious feel to it. Still a poem, albeit a slightly confusing and nonHaiku poem, but a poem anyway. Wink
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 08:55 pm
kernals and colonels... how to describe that
Post: # 3,796,231
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:02 pm
I suppose I'm sorry if I wander off. I don't mind if straighter minds skip my posts. But... I'm often interested in the delving of others besides myself. I'm remarkably ordinary, but
wonder a lot.
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:03 pm
Oops, I'm out of form.

Carry on.
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:11 pm
You're doing fine ossobuco Wink

Free the kernels, rage.
I cast my bleeding dagger
from the dew of rue.
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:19 pm
From the dew of rue
the weeping willow tree mourns
the fall's first harsh frost
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 09:37 pm
the fall's first harsh frost
depends on altitude/wait,
wait for flakes and iceland.
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 10:57 pm
Wait for flakes and Iceland.
Be fairly warned that Loki
can wait til sunrise.
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Reply Wed 28 Oct, 2009 05:23 am
Can wait til sunrise.
All day long wearing a hat,
that wasn't on my head.
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Reply Wed 28 Oct, 2009 05:28 pm
that wasn't on my head
when I got up this morning.
How did I get hair?
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View Profile Dutchy
 
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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 02:31 am
How did I get hair?
Brown velvet hair of marvel,
Shining in the sun.
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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 04:43 am
Shining in the sun
Puddles look like plate mirrors
On the road to town.
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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 05:33 am
On the road to town
A rusty boat in a field
A sign "straw for sale".
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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 05:33 am
On the road to town
I man a man who told me
Beans are cheap today
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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 07:13 am
Beans are cheap today.
The east bound freight train beckons
a new hobo set.
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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 09:29 am
A new hobo set
His back pack on the park bench.
He hitched up his pants.

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Reply Thu 29 Oct, 2009 03:58 pm
He hitched up his pants
as he went to settle some
issues with that cat
 

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