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Neverending Haiku chain

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hamburger
 
  2  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 03:08 pm
@Clary,
returned home in pride
to the family life
we are all called back

(does this pass as haiku -? just giving it first a try)
Intrepid
 
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Fri 29 Aug, 2008 03:13 pm
@hamburger,
(close Hamburger. It should be 5-7-5 syllables. You have 6-6-5. No worries.)


We are all called back
To the life we wish we had
Oh well, such is life
ossobuco
 
  2  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 03:26 pm
@Intrepid,
Oh well, such is life,
she said, while picking lice from
their new home ahead.
Intrepid
 
  2  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 04:19 pm
@ossobuco,
their new home ahead
looked like a mobile home
What, no trailer park?
ossobuco
 
  2  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 04:30 pm
@Intrepid,
What, no trailer park?
No, we're at the pool deck and
staring at the lounge.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 04:34 pm
@ossobuco,
Staring at the lounge,
Where the table is set with food,
I'm almost starving.
Intrepid
 
  3  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 08:27 pm
@Dutchy,
I'm almost starving
But I still have two dollars
to keep me alive
ossobuco
 
  2  
Fri 29 Aug, 2008 10:31 pm
@Intrepid,
To keep me alive
there is music, music, and
more music. Salud!
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 07:24 am
@ossobuco,
More music! Salud!
Let's eat, drink and be merry,
And celebrate life
Intrepid
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 10:31 am
@firefly,
And celebrate life
Rather than kill uncle Milt
before he is born
patiodog
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 12:20 pm
@Intrepid,
Before he is born
Half of a salmon is milt
Gross name for a kid
alex240101
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 01:31 pm
@patiodog,
Gross name for a kid
minus a consonant
We'll call him Ross
hamburger
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 02:43 pm
@alex240101,
we'll call him ross
but intrepid now says five-
seven-five it is

( 5-7-5 , is this any better ?)
firefly
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 02:56 pm
@hamburger,
(looks fine, hamburger)

Seven-five it is,
I'll meet you at the Savoy,
Order me a drink

Clary
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 03:18 pm
@firefly,
Order me a drink
Of nectar, a dish of the
Manuka honey.
hamburger
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 04:14 pm
@Clary,
manuka honey
the drink of sisterhood and
young and old men , too

Dutchy
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 05:22 pm
@hamburger,
young and old men , too
don't forget my old flame pal,
she also loves it.
hamburger
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 05:42 pm
@Dutchy,
she also loves it
dutchy says , feeding her rusks
truly , a dutch treat
Dutchy
 
  2  
Sat 30 Aug, 2008 06:42 pm
@hamburger,
truly, a dutch treat.
The land of windmills, tulips,
can I ever forget.
Intrepid
 
  2  
Sun 31 Aug, 2008 01:35 am
@Dutchy,
can I ever forget
that summer of sixty nine
Oh, where is she now
 

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