Post: # 515,575
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 01:24 pm
Here's how it goes. . .the first line of the next person's haiku must be the same as the last line of the previous person's haiku. (My definition of haiku being just the 5-7-5 thing, not the complicated Japanese naturey thing.)

This could be good fun
More than being swallowed by
A crazy rabbit


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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 02:26 pm
A crazy rabbit
On life's shadowed parlour track;
Oh! How stars fade fast.




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Post: # 515,749
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 03:53 pm
Oh! How stars fade fast
And gnarled goblins dig the earth.
Under there, coal lies.
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 04:00 pm
Under there, coal lies
Sleeping; on top, shadow men
Build shrines to nothing.



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Post: # 515,837
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 05:01 pm
Build shrines to nothing
Alone in the wilderness
Where the palm tree nods.
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Post: # 515,952
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 06:59 pm
Where the palm tree nods
elephants graze in the dark
Zebras love moonlight
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Post: # 516,061
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 08:39 pm
Zebras love moonlight
Sunlight blinds dark shadows
Beauty in contrast
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Post: # 516,117
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 09:58 pm
Beauty in contrast
To the ravages of time
Lies within my heart
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Post: # 516,212
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 01:10 am
Lies within my heart
Appear to the pure as true.
I have such black thoughts.
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Post: # 516,218
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 01:23 am
I have such black thoughts.
Constant, springing from somewhere
I once was.
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Post: # 516,231
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 01:41 am
msolga wrote:
I have such black thoughts.
Constant, springing from somewhere
I once was.

I once was..
A midget-eating giant
Fee fie foe fumble
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Post: # 516,233
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 01:49 am
Fee fie foe fumble,
Hey nonny nonny no no,
Ho! Calloo! Callay!
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 06:02 am
Ho! Calloo! Callay!
Said in some drunken corner. Who
Rewards with no price?




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Post: # 516,322
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 07:06 am
Rewards with no price?
The cost is paid by all men
Spoils go to the few
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Post: # 516,357
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 08:31 am
"Spoils go to the few"
Too many syllables there
Haikus are silly
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Post: # 516,407
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 10:11 am
Haikus are silly
poetry comes easily
it should be tougher
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Post: # 516,447
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 11:06 am
"It should be tougher,"
says Mr. T, getting mad;
"I pity the fool!"
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Post: # 516,470
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 11:27 am
I pity the fool
love intellegent thinkers
Mean people still suck!
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 11:29 am
I pity the fool
He's not alone in this world
The fools pity me
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Post: # 516,538
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Reply Sun 11 Jan, 2004 12:21 pm
Monger wrote:
"Spoils go to the few"
Too many syllables there
Haikus are silly


5
7
5

No? Confused
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