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Whats a non or less vulgar replacement for the phrase: "Revenge F~ck"?

 
 
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Reply Fri 23 Oct, 2009 07:02 am
Can you just get rid of the premise? I mean, if you're not happy with it, can't she seek revenge in some other way? This might be a dumb idea, but... can you show her revenge fantasy as a fantasy? Fantasy sequences when exaggerated can be comical.
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