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Reply Wed 7 Oct, 2009 01:05 pm
i lost my respect for you, you tell me you snort n pop pills your goin down hill throw in the weed u need help your hurtin yourself i dont even know who you are anymore i use to adore you now i dont want nothing to do with you. its true tried to make you my boo and marry you but somthin told me no now look at you hoin around i dont want you around till im six feet under ground so i cant hear the sound of your voice this is the choice i made i was workin twelve hour days you were out getin laid i was getn paid but not enough to pay the bills it kills me to say this but you made my whole life worthless and put a hole in my heart and brought the sunniest days dark.
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Reply Wed 7 Oct, 2009 02:48 pm
Wonderful poem Ray. Maya Angelou would be proud.
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