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Reply Tue 15 Sep, 2009 06:24 am
Rap .. . BitCh
you dont hav ta rhyme on every line
make ah flow -n- hav ah hook dont stunt Ho
[ Battle off the hook ]
Try to mix it
with other rap but in your
words with new meanings..
other wise your copying
Get ah beat, listen to a rap
-n- make ah flow
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Its to (hot)
for ah
(fuck like you)
Ta touch
Back off
taking dis rap ta da next level... (...)Indacates fast rappin
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Reply Tue 15 Sep, 2009 02:08 pm
Ok so i got ta be the first
Step up dnt act lik ah bittch
make some hits tell me how you feel
i think i dnt care but dnt fear
O-kay clear take da G out game
and A.M.E at ur dome
you can leave ur vest at home
cause i ant going for ur chest
No boy strigth for ya dome
you can leave ur vest at home
cause i ant going for ur chest
No boy strigth for ya dome
listen to me and boy in on 22''s quick ride
throw it up i dnt give ah fuck
you can quack i knw ur wack
tak ta da A.M.E dat i got at ur head
pump it real hot tak ta da candy apple red paint on my rid
22''s money money hos but none like you

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Reply Wed 30 Sep, 2009 02:04 pm
you think you can rap you tink you got ryhmes
your just using the same words 22 times
The shit coming from your mouth aint sublime.
And my distaste
for the state
of your rhymes are so great
that i would hate
to see how you get laughed at the professional rapper's gate.
You think your rapping is gonna get you a date
Its not. just go masturbate
like you used to from the morning to late night
You don't have fight.
Your ideas aren't bright
those words don't fly
birds die
when they hear what you cry...
out. and one day you'll be staring out the window
watching the dead crows
and that's when you realize your rapping blows.
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