Reply Tue 25 Aug, 2009 12:11 am
im ill like a sick metaphor,
crowd screaming saying they want some more,
im screaming for a rap battle not just a war!
 
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Reply Tue 25 Aug, 2009 04:53 am
i've got a bit of a head cold

and wouldn't a war be more devastating than a battle
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Reply Tue 25 Aug, 2009 04:38 pm
u want battle,
then i will drive u like cattle,
with me it ain't just the crowd screaming for more,
it also ur mom, she likes it hardcore
she sucks like a fuckin' whore,
oh now don't worry, no need to cry
just stop actin' like a wannabe tough guy,
ur work is bullshit,
now better watch out for my bullets,
grab my 9mm, put it up to your head,
pull the trigger, and leave ur goddam body for dead,
i leave it in a ditch,
til now never knew such a dick cud be a bitch,
oh well don't worry it won't get much worse,
although, when i'm done u gonna be needing a hearse,
tie u up with rope,
then i'm gunna slit ur throat,
man u sound fake,
dumb boasts a great man does not make,
when i see u gunna get out my assault gun,
pull the trigger gunna have a little bit of fun,
bullets flying,
u gunna start dying,
and then i'll be done,
all ur time is gone,
i'm the TNT gunna explode all over ur ass,
and i'm the teacher sending u to the bottom of the class
so if u can do better than this,
hit me back with a diss,
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2009 09:36 am
come man, i wanna battle!
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2009 09:46 am
If you're sick then go to the doctor
You'll only get mocked here
You should just head to the snack bar
'Cause you're like Admiral Ackbar
Tripped up, ripped up if you try to rap,
Your metaphor sucks. 'Cause it's. A. Trap.
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