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English to Latin Translation of Rhyme

 
 
Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 08:07 am
Lest your movements cause you woe,
Lay paper in the pan below.
If you should not, then mark you this -
Prepare to suffer Neptune's kiss.

Can you translate that into Latin? AND keep a rhyme?!

I wrote it for a sign in my bathroom.
 
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Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 08:57 am
I don't know about anyone else here, but I sure can't.
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Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 09:01 am
C'mon, George, word is you're the pro around here!

How about a non rhyming version?
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Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 12:18 pm
Sure.
I'll be back.
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Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 12:47 pm
Lest your movements cause you woe,
Ne motus tui doleat te,

Lay paper in the pan below.
In caccabo schedam infra pone.

If you should not, then mark you this -
Nisi facis, hoc ergo nota -

Prepare to suffer Neptune's kiss.
Osculum Neptuni pati para.
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Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 01:24 pm
Correction to the first line:
Ne motus tui doleant te,
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Reply Wed 29 Jul, 2009 06:02 pm
Thank you George. Ever dependable. You truly are The Man.
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Reply Thu 30 Jul, 2009 06:47 am
You're welcome, iamsam82.
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