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Rephrasing of sentence

 
 
Reply Fri 10 Jul, 2009 02:31 am
You must think we should think of how to we live our lives before we think of how to die. But, I think in order for us to live meaningfully, we should think of how we should die.

The word 'think' is repeated and repeated. Could some member please help me re-phrase so that the word is used less often to improve the text?

Many thanks.
 
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Reply Fri 10 Jul, 2009 06:58 am
You feel that we should think of how we live our lives before we consider how to die. But, I feel that in order for us to live meaningfully, we should think of how we should die.

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