Are my lyrics any good?

waiting for the sky
to turn from grey to blue
waiting for the clock to turn back
to a time when things were good
if i had a chance i'd rewind
to a different place and time
when i used to have love in my life

all my hopes
all my dreams
all my wishes
dashed it seems
all the lonely tears and
all the desperate pain
i just can't cope with life
this way

somehow seems the good
that was my life is over now
know i shouldn't look behind me
but i just don't know how
see through the mist's uncertainty
reclaim my only life
when you're all alone it's hard
to reason why

all my hopes
all my dreams
all my wishes
dashed it seems
all the lonely tears and
all the desperate pain
i just can't cope with life
this way

smile for me and tell me
it will be okay
give me hope to live through this
to see another day
come into my life and show me
where i need to start
give my ever reason
to take heart

all my hopes
all my dreams
all my wishes
dashed it seems
all the lonely tears and
all the desperate pain
i just can't cope with life
this way

**This is my first song ever.. so please be kind of nice [: but tell me what i could improve on pretty please**