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1. Many television commercials are as well-produced, if not more so, as some of the most popular shows.

2. Many television commercials are as well-produced as, if not more so than, some of the most popular shows.

Which of the above sentence is correct?

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[+1] - Setanta - 05/05/2009Number two is correct, however, the comma should come before "than," and not after it: [i]Many television commercials are as well-produced as, if not more so, than some of the most...

@tanguatlay,

Number two is correct, however, the comma should come before "than," and not after it:

Many television commercials are as well-produced as, if not more so, than some of the most popular shows.

Alternatively, you could just leave the comma out altogether:

Many television commercials are as well-produced as, if not more so than some of the most popular shows.

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