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short write-up

 
 
Reply Fri 7 Nov, 2008 03:52 am
Hi fellow members

The following is about cruelty to animal. It is just a short write-up. Could some member/s please go through it and point out the mistakes. If you have any ideas to improve the content, please let me know.

Many thanks in advance for your help.


It is sad to know that animals are being tortured by some mentally-sick people. These people cause the stray animals to suffer because of their cruel ways. They are sadistic as they enjoy seeing them suffer.

An animal is also a living being and so has the right to live! Cruelty towards animals exists in many forms, either intentionally or unintentionally. Prevention of animal cruelty is the duty of every civic-minded person. Anyone who sees a person torturing an animal should call the police so that they are brought to justice.

 
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Reply Sat 8 Nov, 2008 07:23 am
It is sad to know that animals are being tortured by some mentally-sick people. These people cause the stray animals to suffer because of their cruel ways. They are sadistic as they enjoy seeing them suffer.

Animals are living beings, they have feelings, and they have the right to live. Cruelty towards animals exists in many forms, either intentionally or unintentionally. Prevention of animal cruelty is the duty of every civilised person. Anyone who sees a person torturing an animal should call the police so that they are brought to justice. Animals should not be used as toys and people should treat them with more respect, we will regret mistreating them when they become extinct!
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Reply Sat 8 Nov, 2008 07:24 am
hope i helped! :-)
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Reply Sat 8 Nov, 2008 12:02 pm
Hi joker AKA gangster

Thanks for the corrections. Yes, I appreciate your help.

However, I am overawed by your username.

Thanks, again.
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